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Basic Information
Name: Shinru Henryogoku, the Tortured Reaper
Age: Actual: 2000 Appearence: 50 no grey hair.
Gender: Male
Division: Divi 5 Captain
Looks:
Spoiler:
Just like that with a Captain rob on, and red hair.
RankC.C.

Background and Personality
History As a child of the living, Shinru was honored as a Noble Ninja. He trained himself using his family Manuals. This gave him respect from his family. In the ages of ninja and samurai wars, he was a child who fought and killed many. The blood would lay everywhere. But he was unknown to everybody but the Ninja leader, 2nd-in-command, and his family. Later on, discovering the truth about his families' purpose, he betrayed the Ninja, becoming a samurai. Shinru mixed his battle style between Ninja CQC-close quarters combat-, Swift Swordmanship, and Noble Swordsmanship. He was the Assassin Samurai. When he was the age of 18, he became the 2nd-in-command and let his plans flow, as well as the Ninja plans. This allowed the Samurai to win the war. But, due to not trusting SHinru, they tried executing him. For 2 years they failed, which was all they had. Whoever confronted him was killed. Even his wife-who he married at age 19- betrayed him. Also, having children too, they HAD to betray him. Shinru was too skilled though. His family was executed during their sleep so he slept when everybody was dead- which was never. Every three days he was being attacked. Once month, a week straight of fighting came. Blood spread everywhere, staining the two blades of SHinru Henryogoku.

On the day of His birthday, a hollow had come forth. It was an ancient, Cerberus-like beast. It had bit the limbs off of Shinru, biting his head off in the process. The brutal death was unforgettable. As a spirit, he was bound to a castle for a thousand years, practicing weaponless combat. He trained physically as a spirit so that he would be physically strong. But when the shinigami came, the torture started. Arriving into the Rukongai, a unholy cross tattoo appeare don his forehead. It always inflicted pain in the morning. After ten years, Shinru was invited into the Shinigami Academy. Accepting, the nobility had risen. Now, being a student, his Ninja ways have dissappeared. Failing Kidou classes from the second quarter of the year to the graduation, he had been marked as a non-kidou user. What made up for it was his smooth skills in Hoho, noble skills in Zanjutsu, and admirable skills in Hakuda. For a while, he had the tattoo-which was white with a black outline- AND a zanpaktou. When he became a shinigami though, his Zanpaktou dissappeared. This boosted his strength and speed, but left him defenseless to the demons of hell- Hollows and Arrancar. Several hundred years passed, as well as hollows killed, as the once un-ranked shinigami, becoming the vice captain of squad 1.

It excited Shinru, allowing him to be honored by most. Intense blood wars went on with the hollow, as a Espada ran into the Captain Commander. This fight went on for decades, about 6-9 decades. At the end, the C.C. had been decapitated, with amputated hands and feets, then crucified, and burned. The brutal death dishonored the man. Shinru quickly reacted, by releasing his zanpaktou. A blade of darkness and light appeared, and did the same to the Espada. Decapitated, Amputated limbs, Crucified, Burned slowly and painfully. Shinru made the damn hollow feel the pain his superior went through. The crimson blood scattered everywhere, as it then dissolved along with the hollow's remains. After his 1800th brithday, Shinru had trained for 200 years to obtain bankai. There was a dishonorable- in SHinru's eyes- C.C. in charge and he planned to defeat the man. Obtaining bankai, he had Challenged the man 2 months before a dead friends birthday. The man had amputated the right arm of SHinru. It was healed after, but it had a scar. Shinru had amputated the man's fighting arm, and legs.

A month later, becoming the C.C. after the mortal battle of just zanpaktou, the pain came back. Now, Shinru suffers intense pain in shikai and bankai, as well as the morning. it time for another GREAT- not really just painful- day.

Personality Shinru is a kind, quiet, but strict Captain. He disciplines everyone who needs it, like if they were in trouble or didn't follow orders correctly. He is also very clear voiced when he speaks, but with a bit of intimidating hints. He is a excellent fighter, and has aexcellent speed and strength. He is honorable when he fights with a blade, even a bit in weaponless combat. Also, he has a low humor level. His emotions are hidden, but he loves the world, as well as beautiful ladies. But, sadly, he is old and nobody will take him.

Techniques (Optional, but good to have)
Name: Kuroi Kousa (Black Cross)
Description: The Unholy Cross on Shinru's forehead bursts with black light. The way it radiates is like light, but turned black. This is used like a cero, except it is not.
Stats
Strength:Advanced
Speed: Moderate
Accuracy: 60-70% chance to hit.
Stamina: Moderate

Name: Ranpu no Ankoku( Light of Darkness)
Description: Once the zanpaktou is released, the light and darkness dissappear. Then, plumes of darkness shootf rom the ground, around 2-3 come out to attempt to engulf the enemy. If they are fast enough, they can dodge. This is a stun tactic. The next stage solidifies the plumes with light. Doing so, Shinru can trap them in place without harm.
Stats
Strength No Harm, but it is a High strength.
Speed Advanced
Accuracy 80-90% chance to hit.
Stamina High

Zanpaktou Information
Zanpaktou Name: Kuroi Shira Akumu Bachi (Black White Devil Curse)
Zanpakutou Appearence Manifestation:
Spoiler:
Sealed: A tatto on my forehead:
Spoiler:
Shikai Appearence:The blade inverts in colors, so when the blade of the sword turns black, darkness activates. And when white, light.
Spoiler:
Shikai Ability: Corruption and Purification- DUring the Dark mode, anything struck by this sword turns partially black. Also, this weakens that object, allowing it to break easier. It works on people as well, but not Zanpaktou. Although, if the zanapktou is incredibly weaker, then it can crack it at the most. During the Light mode, what is struck is healed if friendly, and sealed if enemy. Say it is Cero Espada, he would have 30% of his power sealed, this goes for everybody else as well.

Penalty of Zanpaktou: When SHikai and bankai are used, and for an hour after awaking in sealed, the zanpaktou/tattoo glows and inflicts serious pain on SHinru, keeping him from using Shikai/Bankai for a long time.

Bankai Appearence:Darkness and Light surrounds SHinru and all around him. TH etattoo on his forehead multiplies and over 100 of the tattoos cover his body.
Bankai Ability: Advanced C and P: The Corruption does not work on zanapktou at all now, and can crumble what it hits after 5 posts. The blackness breaks away, bringing what it touched with it to nothingness. This reaches out to the maximum, a foot wide and a couple inches deep. On Light mode, the Purification heals Shinru only, but it also can seal powers to 40% instead of 30%.

Manipulation of Light and Dark: The light and darkness can be shaped into anything. This can be used for 3 posts straight and can be used only after the first post of bankai.

Advanced Penalty: The Pain inflicted becomes more serious, knocking Shinru out of bankai after 5 posts. The Pain only is mental, then becomes physical after 5 posts.

[/b]Zanpaktou Release Phrase: Allow me to Sacrifice my Life, Kuroi Shira Akumu Bachi

Kido
Choose one of the following for each. Beginner, Intermediate, Advanced.
Kido/Ginto: N/A due to penalties inflicting too much pain for him to be capable of using.
Zanjutsu/Marksmanship: Advanced
Hakuda:
Advanced
Hoho:Intermediate

Role-play Sample:
A sample from a site I rp at with a character I made.

Nimbus looked at them, mysteriously, unaffected by the comments. He remembered that fatal night...His lover was killed by a hollow. His friends were killed by a hollow...And his parents were killed by a hollow. Secretly, Nimbus resented hollows period. "Hello. I am Cloud, Nimbus Cloud. Call me Cloud." he said short and sweet-like. After, he had smirked a bit then resumed his blank face. "How is your day?" he said, talking little. But he still tried to be polite and speak just a little bit. Even though he feels the anger within him towards hollows, he felt comfortable around these two. Nimbus did not really let his guard down, even though his Daisho is shetahed and his hands are in his pockets. He was fast enough to jump back and unsheath within one sonido. Maybe even attack with that sonido but only if attacked. "I get quite lonely without fraccion. I am the Septima Espada, Nimbus Cloud."

Nimbus would say what he thinks of his Title and Nickname if these two were not hollows. He had stopped walking, sensing something, and dissappeared. He expected the two to follow due to just meeting him. It took two quiet sonidos to get to the Forest of Menos. In the first, he unsheathed his Daisho. In the second, he charged right through several menos. THe menos fell down, cut into 5 pieces each. "May you be victorious, even in death." Nimbus said, praying for them. Even though he did not like hollow, he still knew that it was not their fault, it was just isntict controlling them. Maybe most used to be good people who were not saved by shinigami. Who knows? He can't just be brutal with them, but he can slay them so they can't do harm. His reaosns for killing hollow are unknown. The grim face of his emitted sorrow and grief. Killing hollow was wrong, just like killing his loved ones. He knew this.

Then, as he sheathed his Daisho, a Adjuchas shot a cero at him. Within one sonido, the adjuchas fell, the cero shattered into millions of pieces, and several other menos flew back because of the reiatsu. "I may not be tired, but I look like it....I am sorry for the slaying. May you be victorious, even in death."


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