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PostSubject: Former Espada leader -_-   Sat Mar 06, 2010 10:15 am

Basic
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Name:
Zaquri Genesis
Age: Birth number: 56, Old Espada Number: 5, Current number: 105
Gender:
N/A

Arrancar or Espada: Both and Neither?
Number:
As stated.
Looks:
No picture Needed.
Zaquri stands at 7'6", Though he is tall his is rather slim and his skin is as pale as the sand of the White sand desert in Los Noches. His fingers are bony, slim and as soft as a babies ass. His shoulders are always slouched down as though he does it on purpose and it makes him seem as though he is always depressed because with the slouching, Zaquri's Mouth is Wide and its always frowning and remains unchanged despite Zaquri's personality. the weirdest feature of Zaquri is his shins. Both are exceptionally long which gives him his height, about 2 feet each. Zaquri's Hair is raven styled except he has two long thick strands going down his face to his chin in between the eyes and just on the sides of the nose. His hair is dark red and his right eye is red while his left is in the form of a hollow's eyes (narrow yellow eyes surrounded by black within that small portion of the mask covering the face.) Because half of his face is covered a star shapped eye peace which is the remains of his hollow mask. His chin has a scar on it from when his 5 was etched out after being dropped from the Espadas. His dick is much bigger than many would expect too, its 5 inches long and grows larger when he is angry, His old aspect of death was Insanity mainly because of his abilities and not because of his personality.

On his head he wears nothing more than the star piece which is the remaining piece of his hollow mask. But just before he goes out into a battle arranged by him or known to him he draws the word 'Loser' on his forehead. He wears a long sleeve Jacket which is a bit baggy and big covering his hands and arms so that he cannot be misjudged for a weakling because of his Physique and Masculinity or lack there of. Its always left open but his chest is hardly ever seen because its so baggy his chest is covered in shade or darkness. At the shoulders its a bit puffy. He wears leather gloves on both of his hands with 3 bells lined up vertically from and between his wrist to his middle finger. There is no special reason for him wearing this, he just likes the sounds of bells. His pants are Baggy too and kept on his waist with a thick brown sash. He wears normal tube socks which don't appear normal at all, A few holes here and there, Not worth mentioning since then are usually covered by Big jingling Clown boots, And not the ones that are so ridiculously large, the ones that at the top curve upwards with a little bell attached to the top. He only wears them during the day for no particular reason.

Resurrection
Information (Optional, but good to have)

Name:
Ceniza De Cigarrillo (Cigar Ash)
Represent: Jelly Fish
Family:
Water/Poision
Looks:
Zaquri entire body glows Cyan to the point where his shape is nothing but cyan colored light. During this time Getting within 7 feet of Zaquri will Suppress your Reiatsu Dramatically. The light starts Dimming until finally there is no more light, just a gray statue when it is just a shell. At first glance it seems like Zaquri is undergoing another transformation sequence when in fact he already finished transforming the moment the light started dimming. At any time after that Zaquri can break out of the shell revealing his now slimy form. Zaquri grows even more but along with his height his mass also grows. It only makes him look like a larger version of himself, He is now 13 feet tall and oozing slime out of his sweat glans. On his back is a Large Cut going down from his neck to his ass crack which makes it look like He has a huge Cunt on his back. From this, Zaquri can sprout up to 20 slender, blue tendrils which seem see through like the surface of a summer pool. Only Two tendrils can sprout every post and Zaquri's Mask Becomes a large Star covering the lift side of his face. He is completely exposed in this state and the size of his dick has increased to 2 feet long.

The tendrils are Poisonous and Extremely sharp on the sides and at the point. Though they can be easily overwhelmed in a test of Strength, They cannot be harmed by Physical or melee attacks. Once you are cut by them the poison will numb the bodypart/limb w/e it cuts and then start spreading from there. The only way to fight this Poison is by conserving your Reiatsu. Doing this will keep the Poison in the spot it originated but it doesn't council out the numbing effect. Someone who is cut by this will immediately feel the effects and lose the sense of feeling in the area they were cut in. Zaquri's Body is also made of Water particles that hold together with his Reiatsu and form him by gathering and converting Reishi particles. He no longer has the anatomy of a Hollow, The only way you can defeat him is by either Hitting his head with a powerful attack or somehow butting off his ability to reform his body with the surrounding Spirit particles.


Techniques
(Optional, but good to have)
Name:
Gray stinger (Water affinity)
Description:
Gray stinger is a defense ability that converts anykind of energy into water. This technique can be used while Zaquri is in his sealed Arrancar state. When he releases this form is enhanced allowing Zaquri to manipulate the water made through this process and changing its temperature at any moment, when blending water made this way into any other liquid, that liquid to is subjected to any changes the water makes VIA temperature (He can turn the water into ice after decreasing the temperature to a certian extent.). The maximum ammount of water Zaquri cn control with one palm telepathically is 2 tons. Zaquri cannot manipulate water that isn't created by this technique or water used or made by someone elses Reiatsu and he cannot manipulate water from the atmosphere or any quantity of water outside of this technique. This doesn't require Reiatsu.

Grey Stinger (Poison Afinity)
Description:
As soon as Zaquri sprouts his first tendril he can convert water (Even without contact) Made by the effect of Gray stinger, into a poisonous liquid that has the same effect of the tendrils themselves. The temperature of this poisonous liquid cannot be changed and no other poison can counter act it, Grey stinger cancels otu any other poison within the body making this a techniquei that is useful for lifting afflictions off of an ally BUT unless Zaquri goes back to his sealed state before the poision numbs the body then he cannot stop it from spreading and killing the host.

Oblivion Cero
Description:
Zaquri Fires a Cero that is colored just like the Gradient of a Garganta. This Cero is thin unlike most other ceros and a bit faster and ignores physical objects, Thsi ability goes right through anything in
its path as though it was a technique of a ghost and it lacerates the tendons/organs or muscles of the opponent wherever it hits. This ability can only be used twice before Zaquri needs to cool down for 5 posts and it can be used withotu Zaquri Needing to take a stance right from his chest.

Ghost in the shell
Description:
Zaquri can become immune to physical objects in the sense that he cannto be touched by them. The object used to attempt to harm Zaquri would go through him as though he were a ghost. This Can only be used once every two posts and the Cooldown increases by one post every time its used. This technique also instantly regenerate Zaquri to some extent, He cannot reproduce Organs and he cannot reproduce his limbs completely if they were stripped from his body.

The Cero of the Joker
Description:
If by chance Zaquri is put in a tight spot he uses this technique and he can only use it after all 30 of his Tendrils have sprouted from the cunt on his back. The tendrils dissipate into millions of micro sized balls of Reiatsu and gather to form a large ball in front of Zaquri. As soon as Zaquri touches the ball it explodes and does catastrophic damage to Everyone within a 200 mile Radius. Zaquri ignores damage from this explosian but he no longer has Reiatsu at his disposal for the rest of the topic.
History
and Personality:
History:

Zaquri was born Russia, Had a caring mother and father who died during a small and pointless war. While Alone Zaquri's mother had to whore herself to the horny old and weak men within small village they resided in, just so that she could feed her little son who she spoiled to no end. Zaquri spent 12 years inside of that town and Everyday figuring out little by little of how Ironic the world was for to little Zaquri that small village seemed like a world, His mother had a horrible blood disease and the Village Zaquri and his mother resided in had no Doctor. 3 months before his 13th Birthday, Zaquri was left alone after his mother's heart finally gave in to the terrible sickness. After a week of Grieving by refusing to feed himself or bathe or even sleep Zaquri thought it would be best if he moved on. Due to Heredity, He couldn't help but feel as though the situation was funny. Zaquri's father was someone who thought that instead of crying; One must laugh in order to truly overcome Their depression, It may have seemed like it was a stupid solution to Zaquri's Depression but in the end it worked for Zaquri. Zaquri left the small village and traveled as far south as he could. He traveled for 5 years, Staying in motels for a few months by sneaking in Vacant rooms through the back window, Stealing food and money and Staying as far away from danger as possible. Zaquri didn't know what his driving force for living was anymore but he didn't want to just fall down and die. And so finally his will brought him to the large state of Texas Where he started his new life as the comedy act in some two bit Comedy Club known now as "David Summers".

Zaquri was shot on the third of May by some greek mime who didn't like the fact that Zaquri had better jokes than him. When Zaquri became a Whole he roamed once again around the world for approximately 3 years where he discovered for himself Karakura Town. As Zaquri crossed the Bridge to get to the Town he dissipated into Reishi and reappeared somewhere near the College District of Karakura town. After consuming alot of Humans and spirits and some shinigami for a
couple of years, Zaquri's Hunger became too much, He started eating other hollows. He ate and continued dodging the judgment of the shinigami until finally He ascended to Gillian. While he was Gillian he roamed the forest of Menos along with other Gillian. He was eaten by another one after a few years and being the dominant mind inside the hollow he took control of it. Some years later Zaquri became Adjuchas. He was accepted into the espadas because of his abilities and granted the 5th Espada rank. Soon after other Arrancars were made his talents seemed dull and he was dropped from the espadas.


Personality:
Zaquri is an arrancar who has High tolerance and who is barely concerned with other peoples' problems. He is always carefree even in the face of death, a face he spat on more than once. He cannot help but to make a joke out of most situations that make others serious and to turn a problem into a pun for him. Nothing interests Zaquri more than a joke he has yet to hear and he is willing to go through great lengths to find the greatest joke ever told, Sometimes he thinks that the scene of death is the only thing that inspires him to reach for that joke which is his reason for killing.


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PostSubject: Re: Former Espada leader -_-   Sun Mar 07, 2010 4:08 am

Approved.

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PostSubject: Re: Former Espada leader -_-   Wed Mar 10, 2010 9:55 pm

Unapproved.

There are several things wrong with this.

Ressurection:
First, No light that suppresses Reiatsu.

Second: Your Tendrils CAN be cut through and require a post count before they can be regrown.

Another thing, Describe the poisons power, The Duration, Ways that the poison can be removed from the body, and How long it takes to spread through the body.

Slimy Form: Does physical attacks do less damage? Does Energy Based do more?


All of your optional Techniques are voided, They can all be god modded way to easily. Think up some more fair ones.
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PostSubject: Re: Former Espada leader -_-   Thu Mar 11, 2010 12:28 am

Your first; There is no light that suppresses Reiatsu. No idea where you got that from.

Your second; I made it fair enough, My tendrils cannot be harmed be destroyed by anythign physical. Maybe I should emphsize that I didn't mention Reiatsu based attacks, because there are most techniques here that involve invunerablity to pysical attacks and limitting some one else to Reiatsu based attacks, Mine's tendrils are no different.

I described everything about my poison that you are looking for, maybe you didn't read it thoroughly enough. Oh but I did neglect to say how long it takes to spread through out hte body so give me a sec for that.

And I see nothing wrong with my Techniques so long as they have their cooldowns. IF you see ways they can be god modded, you mind sharing with me these 'ways'? And for my 'Ressureccion' form, Since I didn't say anything about a power boost then you can assume that there are none.
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PostSubject: Re: Former Espada leader -_-   Thu Mar 11, 2010 12:40 am

aquri entire body glows Cyan to the point where his shape is nothing but cyan colored light. During this time Getting within 7 feet of Zaquri will Suppress your Reiatsu Dramatically. <- don't shit with me ._.

Godmode techs - bitch please, you automatically give yourself two new Cero, one that blasts anything 200 miles in radius and all that shit, ya also are invulnerable to physical attacks at sealed form and all that.

Slimy always means something, so you're slimy and there's nothing new to add? Nice. COnsidering because of your sliminess, you can only be hit in the head or the back or something? Is it not a power boost? Meh...

Also, what the fuck to the poison thing. You say how one can keep it from spreading much, you don't give duration nor way of extracting.
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PostSubject: Re: Former Espada leader -_-   Thu Mar 11, 2010 12:41 am

GOT DAMN IT REKKAN!
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PostSubject: Re: Former Espada leader -_-   Thu Mar 11, 2010 12:46 am

I'm borrowing some powers, because I'm awesome

1. Former Espada leader... dude no, we have enough of the "I was former CC" No more, putting foot own.


2. When I say looks, I actually mean powers and abilities... OH WAIT No I don't

Looks:
Zaquri entire body glows Cyan to the point where his shape is nothing but cyan colored light. During this time Getting within 7 feet of Zaquri will Suppress your Reiatsu Dramatically. The light starts Dimming until finally there is no more light, just a gray statue when it is just a shell. At first glance it seems like Zaquri is undergoing another transformation sequence when in fact he already finished transforming the moment the light started dimming. At any time after that Zaquri can break out of the shell revealing his now slimy form. Zaquri grows even more but along with his height his mass also grows. It only makes him look like a larger version of himself, He is now 13 feet tall and oozing slime out of his sweat glans. On his back is a Large Cut going down from his neck to his ass crack which makes it look like He has a huge Cunt on his back. From this, Zaquri can sprout up to 20 slender, blue tendrils which seem see through like the surface of a summer pool. Only Two tendrils can sprout every post and Zaquri's Mask Becomes a large Star covering the lift side of his face. He is completely exposed in this state and the size of his dick has increased to 2 feet long.

The tendrils are Poisonous and Extremely sharp on the sides and at the point. Though they can be easily overwhelmed in a test of Strength, They cannot be harmed by Physical or melee attacks. Once you are cut by them the poison will numb the bodypart/limb w/e it cuts and then start spreading from there. The only way to fight this Poison is by conserving your Reiatsu. Doing this will keep the Poison in the spot it originated but it doesn't council out the numbing effect. Someone who is cut by this will immediately feel the effects and lose the sense of feeling in the area they were cut in. Zaquri's Body is also made of Water particles that hold together with his Reiatsu and form him by gathering and converting Reishi particles. He no longer has the anatomy of a Hollow, The only way you can defeat him is by either Hitting his head with a powerful attack or somehow butting off his ability to reform his body with the surrounding Spirit particles.


Take out all the abilities from looks, and describe DURR how you look in your released form.

On his back is a Large Cut going down from his neck to his ass crack which makes it look like He has a huge Cunt on his back.

Highly offensive, remove it or face a wrath worse than any banning or anal ravage could give you.


Becomes a large Star covering the lift side of his face. He is completely exposed in this state and the size of his dick has increased to 2 feet long.

Again, highly inappropriate, remove it, this is bleach not get your momma fucked.


The only way you can defeat him is by either Hitting his head with a powerful attack or somehow butting off his ability to reform his body with the surrounding Spirit particles.

Okay that's it, if you want all those powers, those are all your powers, no techniques, nothing, the shit you have is enough, any more and your a gary sue, and the only Gary Sue's here are Canons, DEAL.




Name:
Gray stinger (Water affinity)
Description:
Gray stinger is a defense ability that converts anykind of energy into water. This technique can be used while Zaquri is in his sealed Arrancar state. When he releases this form is enhanced allowing Zaquri to manipulate the water made through this process and changing its temperature at any moment, when blending water made this way into any other liquid, that liquid to is subjected to any changes the water makes VIA temperature (He can turn the water into ice after decreasing the temperature to a certian extent.). The maximum ammount of water Zaquri cn control with one palm telepathically is 2 tons. Zaquri cannot manipulate water that isn't created by this technique or water used or made by someone elses Reiatsu and he cannot manipulate water from the atmosphere or any quantity of water outside of this technique. This doesn't require Reiatsu.

Any kind of energy, I better see a LARGE ASS cooldown for this one, 8+ posts per ONE attack. And it turns it into water that you can't control, and it takes as much reiatsu to turn as it does to form the attack.


Grey Stinger (Poison Afinity)
Description:
As soon as Zaquri sprouts his first tendril he can convert water (Even without contact) Made by the effect of Gray stinger, into a poisonous liquid that has the same effect of the tendrils themselves. The temperature of this poisonous liquid cannot be changed and no other poison can counter act it, Grey stinger cancels otu any other poison within the body making this a techniquei that is useful for lifting afflictions off of an ally BUT unless Zaquri goes back to his sealed state before the poision numbs the body then he cannot stop it from spreading and killing the host.

NO

Moving on


Oblivion Cero
Description:
Zaquri Fires a Cero that is colored just like the Gradient of a Garganta. This Cero is thin unlike most other ceros and a bit faster and ignores physical objects, Thsi ability goes right through anything in
its path as though it was a technique of a ghost and it lacerates the tendons/organs or muscles of the opponent wherever it hits. This ability can only be used twice before Zaquri needs to cool down for 5 posts and it can be used withotu Zaquri Needing to take a stance right from his chest.

No, way to OP

Moving on

Ghost in the shell
Description:
Zaquri can become immune to physical objects in the sense that he cannto be touched by them. The object used to attempt to harm Zaquri would go through him as though he were a ghost. This Can only be used once every two posts and the Cooldown increases by one post every time its used. This technique also instantly regenerate Zaquri to some extent, He cannot reproduce Organs and he cannot reproduce his limbs completely if they were stripped from his body.

Increase to once every 5-6 posts, and I'll think about it, otherwise no



The Cero of the Joker
Description:
If by chance Zaquri is put in a tight spot he uses this technique and he can only use it after all 30 of his Tendrils have sprouted from the cunt on his back. The tendrils dissipate into millions of micro sized balls of Reiatsu and gather to form a large ball in front of Zaquri. As soon as Zaquri touches the ball it explodes and does catastrophic damage to Everyone within a 200 mile Radius. Zaquri ignores damage from this explosian but he no longer has Reiatsu at his disposal for the rest of the topic.

200 miles, I don't think so... maybe 200 meters, and take out that awful word, I don't want to see it on any of your stuff again.

And I will allow it, if you say no more reiatsu you mean no more reaitsu, that includes sonido's, opening gargantua's, standing on air, ANYTHING you are a human without powers for all intensive purposes.
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PostSubject: Re: Former Espada leader -_-   Thu Mar 11, 2010 12:53 am

Yoooo. I dunno how I even approved this, I've not even seen this application in my life, ffs, wow thats fucking op there. A.A. hit it on the spot.

Musta been seriously out of it. I mean I didn't even ask for any cool downs, which I -always- do. Seriously...this app needs to change, its frickin' op.
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